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Woo Hoo – I’m Awesome – The Course
We had to rewrite some sentances. The green snake slithered across the table. Wound so tight he could have been a spring ready for action, Freddy the snake viewed his life as a dance, every move was a calculated gesture of seduction and threat. A snake has to eat, not be eaten so imagine Freddy’s [...]
Puppy | Jan 27, 2010 | Comments 1
Run, Fatty, Run! – The Second Draft
I’ve just posted this over at the writing course, if you check out the previous post in the catagory you’ll see what ammendments Mr Shipp suggested I make. I have changed the grammatical errors and also added/deleted stuff. There’s also an underlined section which is the old paragraph with the newer one beneath, not sure [...]
Puppy | Jan 25, 2010 | Comments 2