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Run, Fatty, Run! – The Second Draft

I’ve just posted this over at the writing course, if you check out the previous post in the catagory you’ll see what ammendments Mr Shipp suggested I make. I have changed the grammatical errors and also added/deleted stuff.  There’s also an underlined section which is the old paragraph with the newer one beneath, not sure [...]