Comments on: My Short Stories – The Critique! http://www.dogatemywookie.co.uk/2010/01/25/my-short-stories-the-critique/ Sat, 04 Sep 2010 10:02:19 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Satans Puppet http://www.dogatemywookie.co.uk/2010/01/25/my-short-stories-the-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-2130 Satans Puppet Tue, 23 Feb 2010 00:46:24 +0000 http://dogatemywookie.com/?p=796#comment-2130 Just need to finish Virgins, if an Anthology comes up I may sit down n finish it :) Thanking you muchly for the comments. I love reading comments on my blog. It means someone is actually reading it lol ... Well visiting. Just need to finish Virgins, if an Anthology comes up I may sit down n finish it :)

Thanking you muchly for the comments. I love reading comments on my blog. It means someone is actually reading it lol … Well visiting.

]]> By: mga_76 http://www.dogatemywookie.co.uk/2010/01/25/my-short-stories-the-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-2125 mga_76 Mon, 22 Feb 2010 19:39:11 +0000 http://dogatemywookie.com/?p=796#comment-2125 Mate I'm impressed, you got talent. As your tutor said, the imagery is fantastic. You're not just reading it, you can clearly see it playing out in your mind. That's key. If "Run, Fatty, Run" was an excerpt from a book, I'd buy it. Mate I’m impressed, you got talent. As your tutor said, the imagery is fantastic. You’re not just reading it, you can clearly see it playing out in your mind. That’s key. If “Run, Fatty, Run” was an excerpt from a book, I’d buy it.

]]> By: Chris http://www.dogatemywookie.co.uk/2010/01/25/my-short-stories-the-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-1537 Chris Tue, 26 Jan 2010 19:10:59 +0000 http://dogatemywookie.com/?p=796#comment-1537 Good work! It's a good positive critique from your tutor. I look forward to further drafts. Good work! It’s a good positive critique from your tutor. I look forward to further drafts.

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